User:CSharpMajor7/Good Hope Jet/Jljohnson1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CSharpMajor7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:CSharpMajor7/Good Hope Jet


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Good Hope Jet

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the draft so far is good. I believe that the intro could have been a little bit clearer as to what exactly a jet is. The draft is clear and concise, and the information present is relevant and not overly detailed. The draft reads nicely and is easy to understand. I think some things could be expanded on, like why the Jet plays a key role in carrying fish eggs. I think this could be expanded to say why it is important. One thing that I think could be improved is the bibliography, I think that the sources could be presented better. The sources that are used are good and seem to be reliable. I also think that more references could be used.