User:CT.EM20/Brandy Nālani McDougall/Bronsonazama Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CT.EM20 (Kala mai I donʻt know who this is just going off of the username lol)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:CT.EM20/Brandy Nālani McDougall


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Aloha, I am deeply loved by your encompassment of your choses Aloha ʻĀina. I do love the inclusion of an "Awards and Distinctions" section, as it really does help structure things in an easily read way. I would recommend rephrasing "Community Service" with "Politics", because her work does seem to have a political motive of uplifting a marginalized group, rather than service of a broader community.