User:C nguyen143/Agricultural pollution/PeterTruong04 Peer Review

It is great that you narrow it down, to a smaller area, Central Valley. It is also a nice topic to write about. You include some numbers, data and some effects that people might have with enough of the nitrous oxide. It would be better if you also include some of the illness. Like why loss of blood pressure is dangerous, or why Vitamin B-12 deficiency is dangerous. Some extra information, that could explain it better. Other than that, I think you did very well!

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