User:Ca$hley/Dissociative disorder/Mpiard Peer Review

General info
Mpiard
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ca$hley/Dissociative disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dissociative disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I enjoyed reading your edit! It comes off as an educational tone and everything seems relevant to your topic. I did not feel like it was word vomit of information you found from your sources and it was an easy to understand read. I like how each sentence gathered information from a different source. I suggest that for certain terms (i.e. amygdala, hippocampus) you link them to the wiki page for readers who have no clue what these terms mean. Overall impressed!