User:Ca$hley/Dissociative disorder/Organizedchaos39 Peer Review

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Ca$hley
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 * User:Ca$hley/Dissociative disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Dissociative disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Dissociative disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Content: There has been a good amount of content added. However, it may be beneficial to expand more on the relationship between the differences in the hippocampus and dissociative disorders. It may also be beneficial to explain a bit more about the overmodulation of emotions mentioned in the Differences in Brain Activity section.

Tone: You write with confidence and do not use any language that could be seen as biased.

Organization: The added information is clear and easy to read, but could do with some more detail and explanation (see Content).

Sources: All links are working. As you add more information, be sure to add more references. The current references are sufficient for the current edits.

Overall Impressions: These sections are very well written. It is clear that you did a lot of research on this topic and have a lot of information to share.