User:CabbageP/Triptolemus/Anonymouse678 Peer Review

General info
CabbageP
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:CabbageP/Triptolemus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Triptolemus

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like this was more of a plan of what this editor was going to do. There isn't any significant changes done to the original article. With the exception of many paragraphs being spaced out, probably to know where everything is. The creator lists all of the changes that they are going to do. For example, the topic, "Adventures of the hero (weird section; where did this information come from, needing to do further research)". While no actual editing was done, the editor listed everything that they are planning to do. They did add a new section, "Role as Judge of the Afterlife" but there is little changes as of right now. I do believe that once these changes are added, it will make the article better.