User:Cadenprobert/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Arachnology

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because of how many arachnids I have studied over my time in microbiology. They play a big role in spreading disease. They also are very prevalent throughout the world including where we live.

Evaluate the article
The introduction of this article is what really caught my attention. It is organized in a way that I would want to organize an article that I would write. My edit for the introduction would be to take out the sentence about the meaning of the word in greek. This is not relevant or connecting to the information to the paragraph that it is connected. It is slightly over detailed with how far it goes into breaking down the word arachnology. The second paragraph needs to include some imaging that describes arachnology as a science. This could include the different processes or even the different kinds of arachnids. The subspecies section could also include more pictures because I think visualization is the most important thing in identifying arachnids. The good thing about this article is that it has really good sources that do not need to be changed.