User:Cagos068/Universal Design for Learning/KarenM.Cook Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing

Cagos068 (Caterina Agostino)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cagos068/Universal_Design_for_Learning?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Universal Design for Learning - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Caterina! This is a great idea for an insertion on the original UDL article. It fits in perfectly with the topic and you have structured it in a way that helps the reader understand the connection you are making. It also helps us further our understanding of how use of AT is a practical step for achieving effective UDL and the different levels at which this can be performed by educators (low-mid-high tech options). I found it to be very well-written, unbiased, and free of grammatical and spelling errors.

I am wondering if you are still planning to include the components that you have identified under "To Add", as I currently do not see that content laid out on your Sandbox Draft. If so, I would be happy to come back and review that for you before you publish your final copy. Just send me a message to let me know!

You have listed the Technology Related Assistance to IDEA and the 2004 IDEA in your references section but it is not clear whether you will be linking to their Wiki articles or to other sources. You also do not have them underlined when you reference them in-text so you will just want to be sure that you don't miss them when you go to write up your final product.

Before you publicize your subsection, you may want to review the training on in-text citations and referencing. I found this to be a great opportunity to practice, and putting your page together in this way will ensure that there is cohesion with the original article. Wikipedia makes it very easy to include in-text citations and automatically populate your reference list with links that readers can easily click on if they want more information or to check your section for accuracy.

Great job and good luck with your publication!