User:Cailen1/Myocarditis/Carriefish2021 Peer Review

Myocarditis

 * The sentence “With those who develop myocarditis,... 20% mortality rate” is a little hard to follow, consider rewording so it is easier to see what point you are trying to make
 * Consider changing drug to a plural in the sentence “... attributed to the exposure of drug or toxic…”
 * Possibly add why it is seen more commonly in pregnant women and children if that is known and backed by some sort of clinical data
 * The sentence “Young males specifically have…. Cardiomyopathy, heart failure or myocarditis.” change the grammar to match what i just wrote.
 * Maybe add information on why might the smallpox vaccine have an effect on myocarditis and when this vaccine is normally given- does that have an impact on why children are a common population.
 * Does this affect any specific athletes of occupations more than others?
 * Does this affect any specific race more than others?