User:Caitlinbarr/General Hospital of Paris/Bstark88 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * User:Caitlinbarr
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * It could be longer, more thorough. I see you plan to add more so you're on the right track.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * It looks great!

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * One of the times you cited Foucault it seemed like a bit of an argument. You definitely made sure to do it carefully, but it seems a little out of place.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Good!

Organization
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 * I think there needs to be more structure, especially when the statistics come in. Lot of long paragraphs and words without break.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * If you can find any paintings it would be great to see.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Really good, you've clearly done a lot of work. I think once you finish adding information, which u seem near, going back and adding new headers, and subheaders will make a big difference!