User:Caitlincaterinichia/Opioid use disorder/Annaharden Peer Review

General info
Caitlincaterinichia
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Caitlincaterinichia/Opioid use disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Opioid use disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Caitlin! Great work on your article so far. It would be great if you went into some of the preventative measures U.S. officials and government is taking. You might change the word "ensure" to a word signifying something less certain like "encourage" perhaps. The second sentence is a little hard to follow. What type of education? Are you speaking of education about opioid use disorder? Maybe change "lead to provisions made to current opioid distribution amongst healthcare providers" to "lead to medical use of opioids" or something else more concise.

You provided an impressive list of symptoms for opioid use disorder! My only suggestion is to double check multiple sources to make sure your list is agreed upon. Maybe you could cut some of the items from the list if they are less common or debatable. Also, I see on the opioid use disorder page that there are signs and symptoms for opioid intoxication, overdose, and withdrawal. Which category does your list fall under?

If you happen to be interested in it, I noticed that the history section of the original article was slight. You could consider adding to this. Another section you could focus on would be the lead section. This section is supposed to offer a brief summary of what the article goes into. I noticed there are several article sections that are unrepresented within the lead.

I think you are off to a great start, Caitlin. I enjoyed reading your draft and think it will make a great contribution to the article.