User:Caitlinlenox/American Craftsman/Mnooj Peer Review

American Craftsman
Hi Caitlin, this is a very strong draft. I personally found it very difficult to write about a broad artistic movement in the context of an established article, so I was impressed by your ability to identify areas of the original article that needed expansion (e.g. the generalization "along with a wide variety of European art movements..." was transformed in your draft into a great history of the evolution of the AC movement!) Your additions to the sources are solid; some of the references in the original article were painfully outdated. My only real criticism would be the tone of the writing; you have a very engaging, rhetorical prose style that some might find too 'lively' for an encyclopedic article. "Members of the Arts and Crafts movement also balked at Victorian eclecticism, which cluttered rooms with mismatched, faux-historic goods in an attempt to convey a sense of worldliness" is great writing, but might stray a little outside of the objective tone you establish elsewhere in the article.