User:Caitlinmball/Vivien Thomas/Jared Nichols 07 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Caitlinmball


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 * User:Caitlinmball/Vivien Thomas


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think Caitlin did a great job of informing readers on just who Vivien Thomas is. I think there is a lot of good information about Thomas, his career, and some of the major accomplishments he made. The section about Thomas and his relationship with Dr. Alfred Blalock is also very fluid. I think Caitlin did a great job of adding good and descriptive details about Thomas and his experiences working in the lab. I also think that you could create a separate heading around his major accomplishments, so that readers can more quickly find them. I think your choice of sources is good, as they look to be all medical based journals.