User:Caitlyn.Lefebvre/Norma Bailey/Arwynraine Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Caitlyn.Lefebvre


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Caitlyn.Lefebvre/Norma_Bailey?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Fix the spelling errors and any words with "red misspelling" underline( I assume you will before the final draft is due).

In the section of Feminist work, the wording gets somewhat repetitive with the multiple feminist filmmaker/film making, try to change some of those to something else or adjust the wording to cut them out so it doesn't repeat so much.

Consider adding a section on early life in future drafts, I find that most Wikipedia pages on a single person include section on their child and teens years to give a bit more depth on how they got into doing what they do.

I think you have a lot of good information which is really well written with sources that you can relate to the information. Your writing doesn't seem to hold any bias and the tone fits well.