User:CaitlynOwen/Brigitte Kieffer/Hmwhite9 Peer Review

General info
CaitlynOwen
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Brigitte Kieffer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Brigitte Kieffer

Lead

 * The lead paragraph effectively introduces Brigitte Kieffer and states her role in research and the field of neurobiology.
 * It introduces topics to be discussed within the article without going into too much detail.
 * The section is concise and to the point.

Content

 * The content is relevant and describes efforts specifically made by Brigitte Kieffer herself.
 * The content is up to date, with recent publications and job positions stated.
 * The article does indirectly address topics related to historically underrepresented topics by highlighting a woman in science.

Tone and Balance

 * The content added is written in an neutral, unbiased tone.
 * No points are seemingly overrepresented.
 * The article is written in a comprehensive way; perhaps an improvement could be to address parts of Brigitte Kieffer's personal life so as not to focus solely on her professional life.

Sources and References

 * Most of the content is backed up by cited sources; some of the research section could be cited more as there is a lot of technical information.
 * The content does actively reflect the information found in the sources.
 * The sources are mostly up-to-date, with the most recent source being from 2015, and they reflect both journal and reporting articles.
 * The links are functioning.

Organization

 * The content added is well-written; there are no obvious grammatical errors.
 * The content is broken down into major sections but could be broken down further into subsections to make the article easier to follow.

Images and Media

 * The article includes an image of Brigitte Kieffer, but the caption has a typo which can be easily fixed.

Overall Impressions

 * This is a comprehensive article on Brigitte Kieffer, full of relevant information of her career and accomplishments.
 * It could be improved with better organization into subsections, as well as highlights of Kieffer's personal life.