User:CaitlynOwen/Brigitte Kieffer/Kerrigd Peer Review

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CaitlynOwen
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Brigitte Kieffer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Brigitte Kieffer

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

I really thought this was a great lead. It introduced the topic, Brigitte Kieffer, and key details with links to wikipedia articles on areas of focus in her career. It is concise and introduces subtopics that are to be explained in great detail later in the article.

Content

the content in this article is very rich. The editor did a great job at finding information-filled sources and explaining the research and awards of Kieffer. the content is up to date and everything mentioned in the article is beneficial to the reader's understanding of who Brigitte Kieffer is.

Tone and Balance

there is great tone and balance that is consistent throughout the entire article. it is very neutral, displaying facts and information regarding Kieffer's life and education and does not present any personal bias from the author.

Sources and References

The sources used are very strong and support all statements made within the article. I would suggest not using that long of a quotation in the first paragraph of the Research section. Overall sources were given credit and they were all important in painting the picture of who Brigitte Kieffer is.

Organizing

The first sentence of the "Life" section should be reworded to remove "which was", maybe to something like "Kieffer maintained a close relationship with her alma mater, University of Strasbourg, as she began her professional career as a professor." There is not much about her personal life included in the article. even though there is a heading named Life, it only touches on her education and should be accurately described as that. I really liked that the author included a quote into the article, I think that was a great choice and one that gives a little more insight into who Kieffer is as a person without explicitly saying it.

Overall Impression

I am very impressed with this article and the edits made by the author. Overall, it is a very strong article that gives the readers exactly what they are looking for if they are interested in the life and research of this cell biologist.