User:CaitlynRCooper/Wearable art/EN2216 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CaitlynRCooper


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CaitlynRCooper/Wearable_art?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wearable art

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and describes exactly what wearable art is, like describing the different mediums that wearable art consists of and how it is used in different ways. This is relevant to the rest of the article.

None of the new changes show any bias and only discuss factual information. Each section has content that stays relevant to its title and covers a variety of topics. I think that some of the mediums could be expanded but the direction they are going in is working well for the page.

The only references or sources that seemed to be missing is for the section on fibers. However, the section doesn't seem to be entirely finished so it may still be in progress. It is useful to have a list of the exhibitions and events that have shown wearable art; I think its a nice addition to the article. I like that there are links to other forms of similar art as well.

The content was easy to read and very descriptive. I didn't see any outstanding grammatical errors and each section was easy to identify.

I think the new additions have contributed nicely to the article as a whole. They help the viewer better understand the content as well as make it more interesting.