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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title- Dog communication
 * Article Evaluation- This article has a solid foundation. It is organized well and the content is relevant to the topic. I think I can add citations/ references to the article. There are images and most are citated but I noticed one image missing a reference. Bullet points are used throughout the article. For better grammar in the set of bullet points would be consistency in tenses used. Using the source below I can add information to the Licking and sniffing section that would discuss how dogs lick their lips as an appeasement signal to humans.
 * Sources- https://pdf.sciencedirectassets.com/273563/1-s2.0-S1558787816X0010X/1-s2.0-S1558787816302490/main.pdf?X-Amz-Security-Token=IQoJb3JpZ2luX2VjEKr%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2FwEaCXVzLWVhc3QtMSJGMEQCIBgkwjCN1%2BDaQxEsoL7OleiteMlaMquxVTJH4NZdqtMGAiAgiIyCT0fZrbmSIcUCURtZ7prr6yPNLN72kOOjRpswOSrMBAgzEAUaDDA1OTAwMzU0Njg2NSIMhCrR0S14ShBo9X7YKqkEDPw1NpKeKhfTAdSWBoC1F7lZcZFD2QAtM3o1xNLAp22ntHzUVWuX1zy%2FBzKUvmhBBx9YkVcBLd57g%2Fr%2F4mAnV%2B0WX1eYhcH7WFgkXEXKd1IEVlBJb1sEf422Gq3c7NCftKuAfQ8C8k5fYlidyI7nbwwTQJ6to0tfq8NprBdCjiDHp0eA%2BVLSoYI50uFmMaiOnZWtkWi0hDsFf5yQRT15gPbRIVi5WTMLw%2FvIdg0fN6xOTN6VhpOWpDM2VzFkjeXJVIYMMhpbXV4XRHR6GNAVR%2BvYXK7ThLLMrK%2FtgEmiafsD5Jf1qEwYhhqZdl%2F92clSCKVBhE%2FmrKXkIYAoq6WDrTqvQ1xmg3Wc%2Blyej3IYMxNDBdV%2FJdMq7wRQ9GRHCiepFMBj09oSnKLnqKBC%2B2xuMgQyZccwH20nwLH6zzukX8BlX1ksTdXSTweq6Sr9giujYehntVBN%2FZLWkk7eqflRiihhE6Auu3%2BmF38o%2B2uyaXPO5KFCpiHSMmTQuo3Rlz6v9CvJeYbwYFttZ%2BgfGfe62efj4UjFyNk9Fj9rTT2WPvtJFNBvBw01ncmm3%2FBxWehM6f0XqUOeYYWRxr0bMiVtUYs2%2FepjF2oTX%2Fa2YaZCcv5ijfkJJu0lqIqeCstUwcHdROxWoYy3maBrCzwB4UI6xsHm6zMJ%2BpvuHroNa8zh7o6PtCv5lk3ItI%2BQEPCpsefRjkw5qgYP%2FvcM4GdSGcnuvMJB5VbfKczEKjC90f%2BeBjqqAbr8%2BYyF6Z5BNOeYy67Um7VewZ65pdMNP9zuiP6E2G4Y29YbojxYRpGYAxjMOGjyrL7Js8z5s5M8Q7qIp5c6iI0suehQj5fV4VWbx9kKER4aAizmjEIa%2BtUL9qxResYpWPGxM%2Fm5j20PCHDj40LeXOOjuE%2FvFsq6C%2B7vyIuC%2F7oHlWhOuOINFGcoGJb0vdycOjoGTdTkhEdPtGJcOgRxEF7dOA8Gws4B5Shz&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Date=20230205T183400Z&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Expires=300&X-Amz-Credential=ASIAQ3PHCVTY652BDM45%2F20230205%2Fus-east-1%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Signature=796d16b6595fd261328614a93f3998279934a8c5fdbc1a1b47fa6e0038f7825f&hash=78dbb4f0f6c8a6050164d9b882270cc55d8503014404f88b75ce46af3099d04f&host=68042c943591013ac2b2430a89b270f6af2c76d8dfd086a07176afe7c76c2c61&pii=S1558787816302490&tid=spdf-580bf752-d0cc-460c-b54d-8cac29850bfa&sid=112e14fb67e1564a4d3aaa14d26cd630ee01gxrqa&type=client&tsoh=d3d3LXNjaWVuY2VkaXJlY3QtY29tLmV6cHJveHkzLmxpYnJhcnkuYXJpem9uYS5lZHU%3D&ua=1b16585f5a0a0d0600&rr=794dbcd8efa5a6f7&cc=us
 * Sources- https://pdf.sciencedirectassets.com/273563/1-s2.0-S1558787816X0010X/1-s2.0-S1558787816302490/main.pdf?X-Amz-Security-Token=IQoJb3JpZ2luX2VjEKr%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2FwEaCXVzLWVhc3QtMSJGMEQCIBgkwjCN1%2BDaQxEsoL7OleiteMlaMquxVTJH4NZdqtMGAiAgiIyCT0fZrbmSIcUCURtZ7prr6yPNLN72kOOjRpswOSrMBAgzEAUaDDA1OTAwMzU0Njg2NSIMhCrR0S14ShBo9X7YKqkEDPw1NpKeKhfTAdSWBoC1F7lZcZFD2QAtM3o1xNLAp22ntHzUVWuX1zy%2FBzKUvmhBBx9YkVcBLd57g%2Fr%2F4mAnV%2B0WX1eYhcH7WFgkXEXKd1IEVlBJb1sEf422Gq3c7NCftKuAfQ8C8k5fYlidyI7nbwwTQJ6to0tfq8NprBdCjiDHp0eA%2BVLSoYI50uFmMaiOnZWtkWi0hDsFf5yQRT15gPbRIVi5WTMLw%2FvIdg0fN6xOTN6VhpOWpDM2VzFkjeXJVIYMMhpbXV4XRHR6GNAVR%2BvYXK7ThLLMrK%2FtgEmiafsD5Jf1qEwYhhqZdl%2F92clSCKVBhE%2FmrKXkIYAoq6WDrTqvQ1xmg3Wc%2Blyej3IYMxNDBdV%2FJdMq7wRQ9GRHCiepFMBj09oSnKLnqKBC%2B2xuMgQyZccwH20nwLH6zzukX8BlX1ksTdXSTweq6Sr9giujYehntVBN%2FZLWkk7eqflRiihhE6Auu3%2BmF38o%2B2uyaXPO5KFCpiHSMmTQuo3Rlz6v9CvJeYbwYFttZ%2BgfGfe62efj4UjFyNk9Fj9rTT2WPvtJFNBvBw01ncmm3%2FBxWehM6f0XqUOeYYWRxr0bMiVtUYs2%2FepjF2oTX%2Fa2YaZCcv5ijfkJJu0lqIqeCstUwcHdROxWoYy3maBrCzwB4UI6xsHm6zMJ%2BpvuHroNa8zh7o6PtCv5lk3ItI%2BQEPCpsefRjkw5qgYP%2FvcM4GdSGcnuvMJB5VbfKczEKjC90f%2BeBjqqAbr8%2BYyF6Z5BNOeYy67Um7VewZ65pdMNP9zuiP6E2G4Y29YbojxYRpGYAxjMOGjyrL7Js8z5s5M8Q7qIp5c6iI0suehQj5fV4VWbx9kKER4aAizmjEIa%2BtUL9qxResYpWPGxM%2Fm5j20PCHDj40LeXOOjuE%2FvFsq6C%2B7vyIuC%2F7oHlWhOuOINFGcoGJb0vdycOjoGTdTkhEdPtGJcOgRxEF7dOA8Gws4B5Shz&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Date=20230205T183400Z&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Expires=300&X-Amz-Credential=ASIAQ3PHCVTY652BDM45%2F20230205%2Fus-east-1%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Signature=796d16b6595fd261328614a93f3998279934a8c5fdbc1a1b47fa6e0038f7825f&hash=78dbb4f0f6c8a6050164d9b882270cc55d8503014404f88b75ce46af3099d04f&host=68042c943591013ac2b2430a89b270f6af2c76d8dfd086a07176afe7c76c2c61&pii=S1558787816302490&tid=spdf-580bf752-d0cc-460c-b54d-8cac29850bfa&sid=112e14fb67e1564a4d3aaa14d26cd630ee01gxrqa&type=client&tsoh=d3d3LXNjaWVuY2VkaXJlY3QtY29tLmV6cHJveHkzLmxpYnJhcnkuYXJpem9uYS5lZHU%3D&ua=1b16585f5a0a0d0600&rr=794dbcd8efa5a6f7&cc=us
 * Sources- https://pdf.sciencedirectassets.com/273563/1-s2.0-S1558787816X0010X/1-s2.0-S1558787816302490/main.pdf?X-Amz-Security-Token=IQoJb3JpZ2luX2VjEKr%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2FwEaCXVzLWVhc3QtMSJGMEQCIBgkwjCN1%2BDaQxEsoL7OleiteMlaMquxVTJH4NZdqtMGAiAgiIyCT0fZrbmSIcUCURtZ7prr6yPNLN72kOOjRpswOSrMBAgzEAUaDDA1OTAwMzU0Njg2NSIMhCrR0S14ShBo9X7YKqkEDPw1NpKeKhfTAdSWBoC1F7lZcZFD2QAtM3o1xNLAp22ntHzUVWuX1zy%2FBzKUvmhBBx9YkVcBLd57g%2Fr%2F4mAnV%2B0WX1eYhcH7WFgkXEXKd1IEVlBJb1sEf422Gq3c7NCftKuAfQ8C8k5fYlidyI7nbwwTQJ6to0tfq8NprBdCjiDHp0eA%2BVLSoYI50uFmMaiOnZWtkWi0hDsFf5yQRT15gPbRIVi5WTMLw%2FvIdg0fN6xOTN6VhpOWpDM2VzFkjeXJVIYMMhpbXV4XRHR6GNAVR%2BvYXK7ThLLMrK%2FtgEmiafsD5Jf1qEwYhhqZdl%2F92clSCKVBhE%2FmrKXkIYAoq6WDrTqvQ1xmg3Wc%2Blyej3IYMxNDBdV%2FJdMq7wRQ9GRHCiepFMBj09oSnKLnqKBC%2B2xuMgQyZccwH20nwLH6zzukX8BlX1ksTdXSTweq6Sr9giujYehntVBN%2FZLWkk7eqflRiihhE6Auu3%2BmF38o%2B2uyaXPO5KFCpiHSMmTQuo3Rlz6v9CvJeYbwYFttZ%2BgfGfe62efj4UjFyNk9Fj9rTT2WPvtJFNBvBw01ncmm3%2FBxWehM6f0XqUOeYYWRxr0bMiVtUYs2%2FepjF2oTX%2Fa2YaZCcv5ijfkJJu0lqIqeCstUwcHdROxWoYy3maBrCzwB4UI6xsHm6zMJ%2BpvuHroNa8zh7o6PtCv5lk3ItI%2BQEPCpsefRjkw5qgYP%2FvcM4GdSGcnuvMJB5VbfKczEKjC90f%2BeBjqqAbr8%2BYyF6Z5BNOeYy67Um7VewZ65pdMNP9zuiP6E2G4Y29YbojxYRpGYAxjMOGjyrL7Js8z5s5M8Q7qIp5c6iI0suehQj5fV4VWbx9kKER4aAizmjEIa%2BtUL9qxResYpWPGxM%2Fm5j20PCHDj40LeXOOjuE%2FvFsq6C%2B7vyIuC%2F7oHlWhOuOINFGcoGJb0vdycOjoGTdTkhEdPtGJcOgRxEF7dOA8Gws4B5Shz&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Date=20230205T183400Z&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Expires=300&X-Amz-Credential=ASIAQ3PHCVTY652BDM45%2F20230205%2Fus-east-1%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Signature=796d16b6595fd261328614a93f3998279934a8c5fdbc1a1b47fa6e0038f7825f&hash=78dbb4f0f6c8a6050164d9b882270cc55d8503014404f88b75ce46af3099d04f&host=68042c943591013ac2b2430a89b270f6af2c76d8dfd086a07176afe7c76c2c61&pii=S1558787816302490&tid=spdf-580bf752-d0cc-460c-b54d-8cac29850bfa&sid=112e14fb67e1564a4d3aaa14d26cd630ee01gxrqa&type=client&tsoh=d3d3LXNjaWVuY2VkaXJlY3QtY29tLmV6cHJveHkzLmxpYnJhcnkuYXJpem9uYS5lZHU%3D&ua=1b16585f5a0a0d0600&rr=794dbcd8efa5a6f7&cc=us

Option 2

 * Article title- Sabino Canyon
 * Article Evaluation- The article has a lot of good information. From the start, I noticed I can add to the introduction section to the list of animals, the bighorn sheep. I ran into one myself there a few months ago. The "History and formation" section has no sources cited. If I can find sources to reference in this section, it would make a good contribution. Also, after reading the talk page, it states that maps of the park would be a beneficial addition, so I will look for that. Also, there was no mention of wildfires. I have found a source that talks about the wildfires and the effect on the canyon.
 * Sources- https://www.fs.usda.gov/recarea/coronado/recreation/recarea/?recid=75425
 * Sources- https://www.fs.usda.gov/recarea/coronado/recreation/recarea/?recid=75425
 * Sources- https://www.fs.usda.gov/recarea/coronado/recreation/recarea/?recid=75425

Option 3

 * Article title- The Real Housewives
 * Article Evaluation- This article has a lot of relevant information already. The one thing I noticed I could edit was in the "spin offs" section. A new show Traitor was released on Peacock January 2023 and has Brandi Glanville on the cast.
 * Sources- https://www.imdb.com/title/tt15557874/fullcredits?ref_=tt_ov_st_sm
 * Sources- https://www.imdb.com/title/tt15557874/fullcredits?ref_=tt_ov_st_sm
 * Sources- https://www.imdb.com/title/tt15557874/fullcredits?ref_=tt_ov_st_sm

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