User:Caldwell805/The Climate Reality Project/Caldwell805 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Chewydog19

= The Climate Reality Project =
 * The Climate Reality Project - Wikipedia:

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Sufficient amount of text added, and the information added is important to understanding the article (ex: goal of the Climate Reality Project)
 * A couple grammar mistakes (ex: do not need comma after first added sentence, "The Climate Reality Project has been growing drastically over the past few years."
 * Some sentences sound choppy
 * Could potentially combine sentences or reword to sound more professional.
 * There could also be better transitions between sentences (ex: transitioning to the goal of the project
 * Good addition with a reference.
 * Potentially adding at least one more reference or citing sentences in the beginning of the added paragraph
 * Content is neutral and without bias
 * However, I would remove "The Climate Reality Project tries very hard to stop new fossil fuel projects." Maybe saying something like, "The Climate Reality Project strives to mitigate new fossil fuel projects."
 * Overall, this was a good addition because it added more information about the Climate Reality Project development, goals, and future. However, some grammarly errors should be revised, and some transitions to help the sentences flow more efficiently.