User:CalebTerronez/Friend zone/Aroddy1 Peer Review

Peer review - General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CalebTerronez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Friend Zone - Student Sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article:
 * Friend Zone - Live Page

Peer review - Feedback
Feedback Peer Review for Friend zone by aroddy1:

Overview:

Firstly, I think that you are off to a good start. I think starting is one of the hardest parts, of the information you have down, and have added is a good jump start.

The information that you have added to the lead and the criticism sections also help expand the article. Specifics & Suggestions:

As for my suggestions, I would try to add more sources, and get some more critical information in; that would then allow you to further expand what you already have down. Furthermore, looking over the live page, it looks like that you could easily expand the "popular culture" section, OR, create a "Research" section where you describe what studies have been done on the subject. It seems like the pop culture part only really mentions it in popular TV shows and stuff. it would be nice to add the 'real world' aspect of it.

Closing:

Overall I think you're off to a good start, and I look forward to seeing the final result! GOOD WORK! :-)