User:CalebTerronez/Friend zone/Dianabmorales Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CalebTerronez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CalebTerronez/Friend_zone?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Friend zone

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The added content in the sandbox is very little and incomplete - it is just a couple of sentences. I suggest to research the topic more in depth and add more relevant content. I also can't tell where in the article do you plan on adding this information - please, add a subsection title. Additionally, it is very important that you cite your sources - is this just your opinion or is that from a research paper? All new added content has to be backed up by a credible source!

As for the original article itself, I think the lead is too lengthy. It needs to be more concise and to the point. For example, the paragraph about the fact that the term was originally from the sitcom "Friends" would fit better under the section "Popular Culture", as it is mentioned there already. Also, the paragraph is not cited. The paragraph about the term being considered "mysoginistic" would fit better under "Criticism of the term" as it is already mentioned there.

Some sources might be considered not reliable enough. For example, the second source from the website salon.com "6 reasons the "friend zone" needs to die" might not be a reliable source as it is just a journalists opinion written in a magazine. Find some more reliable sources to cite and gain information from. Make sure that your sources are authored by a diverse group of people to avoid bias.

The article could benefit from additional sections to be covered, such as about the positive aspects of the term "friend zone" - otherwise, it looks biased towards thinking of the term as negative. For example, in the talk page, someone mentioned that "The value lies in saving the man from wasted time and unwanted hurt." - you can look into it more and try find some reliable source's facts about this.

It is also missing pictures - it could benefit from adding some pictures.