User:Calebboudreau/Sepsis/Clauf20 Peer Review

General info
Calebboudreau
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Calebboudreau/Sepsis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sepsis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, you did a very good job in writing your draft. You have good references and the draft is organized well. I would reccomend having your sources cited throughout the text (I would reccomend starting that as soon as you can). This may be due to a lack of in-text citations, but It also looked like you included some opinionated statements.