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Evaluation of Tuamotuan language
I plan to contribute to the Tuamotuan Language article in the following ways:

I would like to add some information regarding the languages that the Tuamotuan language is related to.

A citation is still needed in the first sentence with respect to how many people speak Tuamotuan in Tahiti.

Overall, I would like to expand the Tuamotuan Language page to include more information on the history of the language, its etymology, and the current usage of it. More information on the current status of the language with regards to extinction might be beneficial as well.

As a whole, the Tuamotuan Language article is underdeveloped and needs more content to be considered an effective article.

Following is a list of the sources I have compiled and plan to use:
Charpentier, Jean-Michel & Alexandre François. 2015. "Atlas Linguistique de la Polynésie Française —Linguistic Atlas of French Polynesia."

Stimson, J.F. & Marshall, Donald Stanley. 1964. "A Dictionary of Some Tuamotuan Dialects of the Polynesian Langauge."

Tregear, Edward. 1895. "A Paumotuan Dictionary with Polynesian Comparatives."

Kuki, Hiroshi. 1969. "Tuamotuan Phonology."

Evaluation of Boeing C-32
The article could be improved in the following ways:

- The article could have more information added regarding operational uses of the C-32.

- A citation should be added on the second paragraph of the "Design and Development" section.

- A citation is still needed on the last paragraph of the "Design and Development" section.

- A citation is still needed on the second sentence of the "Operation" section.

- A citation is needed to verify that the C-32 is operated by the 150th Special Operations Squadron ("Operators" section)

- A citation is needed for the "Specifications" section.

- A few more references might be helpful.

The good points of the article are as follows:

- The article is neutral in tone and provides an objective view of the aircraft and its use; there are no overrated viewpoints.

- The article provides the basic information regarding the aircraft and lists pertinent details and specifications.

The talk page discussion involves the following conversations:

- Whether or not to add a minor related incident that had only recently occurred (at the time of the conversation).

- The incorrect location tag of a photograph in the article.

- The use of an adjective in a subjective way, pertaining to how comfortable the aircraft seats are.

Additional Information:

- This article is rated as a C-Class article; it has been tested against the B-Class criteria and has not met them due to a lack of proper citation and referencing.

- The article is a part of the Military history WikiProject