User:Calenjanesky/Bessie Brown Mention/Belleevans Peer Review

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Calenjanesky's Bessie Brown page


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 * User:Calenjanesky/Bessie Brown Mention


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I think this article gives good information on the activist, but it is pretty short and lack detail that could give the author more insight into her work and career. When you mention that she ran for office but lost both times, maybe you could include information on what her campaign was like, what she said her main issues would be if she took office, and why she lost.