User:Calenjanesky/Bessie Brown Mention/Julsy2002 Peer Review

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This draft contains a general overview of Bessie Brown's life and work, but doesn't contain a lead or much background that leads into the article. The article begins by detailing Brown's personal life, however it might be helpful to begin with an overview of Brown and who she was before going into her personal life. The content added is relevant to the topic and up to date, as Brown died in 1946. There doesn't seem to be any content that is missing or that doesn't belong, however, the Career section of this article contains a lot of repetition and a couple typos. As a reader, I would like to know more about Brown's work helping migrant workers in New Jersey. The content in this article is neutral and there are no claims that seem to be heavily biased. Additionally, all of the information included is backed up by reliable secondary sources, and the information included in the article matches the sources. Concerning thorough sources, there may not be a lot of information readily available about this woman because she lived a long time ago, but the two sources linked seem to provide information that may not reflect all of the information that is out there on this historical figure. The sources used are also not written by a diverse range of authors. There may be better sources available such as peer reviewed articles, yet it is still possible that this is all of the information readily available about Brown. This article meets Wikipedia's notability requirement. The list of sources cited is not exhaustive, but provides enough information for a brief overview, although I still would like more information. This article does a good job of following a common structure and contains necessary info-boxes and headings.