User:Cali0323/Forensic biology/Littlefix21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cali0323


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cali0323/Forensic biology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Forensic biology

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Have just began reading but I can't really tell where any information has been added. I don't think the whole article needed to be posted to do edits, just what is being edited or added. After asking, found it was the "FORENSIC ODONTOLOGY" seciton.

- Seems like the whole original section was simply deleted and then rewritten. It is not a bad edit just kind of odd when looking between the two. I think if sources were cited then that would help in understanding what was changed and or moved.

- There is no sources cited.

- I like the proper usage of hyperlinking key terms for anyone confused on certain words or concepts.

- It seems like for some of the information when compared to the original, it is lacking some info. I think you can expand on the article just a little more.

- Tone is all good, it is all factual and knowledgeable about the topic.