User:Callierichard27/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Lisa Randall

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
More recognition needs to be given to female scientists, more information needs to be added Randall's page to fully grasp her research and impact on physics and the overall scientific community.

Evaluate the article
This article has a good structure to it and is a good starting point to work from.

Some things I would change/add:

-Include less physics concepts and more of her accomplishments in the intro section

-Do research and include more up to date content (most recent date in article is 2019)

-The writing section could have a little more flow to it, I had to reread some sections for clarity

-The personal life section is a little out of place to me, I would expect to see more about her family or hobbies as opposed to so much attention toward her religious beliefs

-Lots of sources, would expect more content in the article than there is

-The article is rated a C so there is room for improvement

-The one image is good, but there could be more

-Reorganization of the academia section would be beneficial: explain concepts and how they connect to Randall's work better instead of just listing them (but there are links provided so maybe its okay

-Expand on her contribution to the Randall-Sundrum model (what she is known for) and make it its own section