User:CalmPeach/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Listeria monocytogenes


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article would be perfect for editing since there isn't a lot of information on this page, barely any pictures, and each section has just a couple of sentences. Also the articles aren't update with information the websites they used, and the grammar needs to be fixed. Symptoms could be added so that people can understand how they can happen.


 * Sources
 * The sources such as the CDC on this article have most likely changed since 2019, but besides that the articles are quite new compared to most articles. I think that a few new articles should be added with more information. https://www.cdc.gov/listeria/publications.html

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Listeria


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has the same pictures used in Listeria monocytogenes, so I think that they should have more pictures in here that aren't just from this species. More information could be added to this article considering there is barely any, and newer articles could be added. Symptoms could be added to help spread information for how this could affect people.


 * Sources
 * Some sources that weren't added in the article, but that they had them in further reading could help with more information being added.
 * https://www.fda.gov/animal-veterinary/animal-health-literacy/get-facts-about-listeria

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Francisella tularensis


 * Article Evaluation
 * There are a few questionable sections that could be added under history, but the person who wrote them put them in an unsure tone. So, I feel like these things should be removed from the article all together. There is all together a lot of quesitonable information, which could be how the person wrote it, but it isn't in a neutral tone. More pictures could be added to make this page more appealing.


 * Sources
 * More sources could be added since there are only around 20 that are being used for information on this article. For basic information this article could be used: https://emergency.cdc.gov/agent/tularemia/facts.asp

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Francisella


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is considered a start with mid-imporatance, so I think this would be perfect to edit since there isn't a lot of information on wikipedia yet. There is only 6 sources being used, and four sections with barely any information in them, so it could use a lot of work to build it up. It could also use more pictures in it.


 * Sources
 * There aren't many sources for this bacteria alone, but this source has good information under its resources: https://veterinaryresearch.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s13567-020-00834-5

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Helicobacter


 * Article Evaluation
 * This source is considered a start as well as mid-importance, so it would be important to edit this article. There could be more pictures since there is only one, barely any information is in this that would be easy to understand, and there is no history on this page. There could be more infomation on symptoms that occur, and what it is likely to infect.


 * Sources
 * These sources are the only two I could find with more information on Helicobacter, which aren't fully on H. pylori:
 * https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fimmu.2020.584165/full
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/hel.12866