User:CalmPeach/Listeria ivanovii/Carolin Zion Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CalmPeach


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CalmPeach/Listeria_ivanovii?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article has good information so far. Well done! The information is presented in the neutral tone, followed up by corresponding sources.

Laniese's response
Hi, Carolin Zion! Thanks for reviewing our article draft. We have been working hard to make sure that we are using a neurtral tone and good sources. Do you have any information thay you think we could add or is not necessary?