User:Calvin.walls/Lake Erie/1517luther Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Calvin.walls - Wikipedia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Calvin.walls/Lake Erie - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Erie - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Calvin,

There isn't much for me to review here. You have some sentences in your sandbox, but the information provided is already in the article on Lake Erie. You have a solid start on your references and it looks like you chose reliable ones. My suggestion would be to take a section of the Lake Erie article and improve it. You could also check the Lake Erie article for citations that no longer link to an existing article and update them. Ideas for adding to the article are in the article talk section Talk:Lake Erie - Wikipedia.

One suggestion by another user under the "talk" section states he is "very surprised not to see a word about the Erie Canal in the history section. This note was left in 2021 and appears to still not be addressed.

You are, however, one of the few classmates with anything in your sandbox to review, so I appreciate that.