User:Cam Structure/Glenn B Anderson/Lizzah12 Peer Review

Peer review
I am reviewing Cam Structure's User:Cam Structure/Glenn B Anderson article.

Hi, this is a great contribution to Wikipedia! Overall I think your article is fantastic and very well-written. I do have some thoughts however:


 * Adding images to the article would be really nice, to make the article more visual. Perhaps a current picture of him as a member of the NBDA, and an older picture of him as a college graduate if you're able to find one. A picture of his book? A snippet of the Arkansas Association of the Deaf newsletter? A picture of him with his wife Karen for the Personal Life section?
 * Personal Life & Book would be better as separate sections. You could perhaps include a brief information about his book, without giving too much away. Such as what kind of book is it? Is it an autobiography? etc.
 * Early Life & Education: Maybe you could give an explanation as to why he did not receive support in schools? You could link it to a historical event, such as the ADA, NAD, the oral movement, Stokoe, interpreters, etc. Moreover, I find myself wondering what he had to do to push himself through school without any accommodation. Did he have a hearing friend take notes for him? Did he have to read many books every day outside of school & homework time just to keep up? (I have met several elderly Deaf people who had to do this to be able to graduate from school & college.) It may be hard to find information on this, however.
 * Also, if you are able to find information you should expand on his language background. Did he know & use sign language? Was he raised oral (or was he just expected to lipread?) etc. Or did he learn sign language later in life? If so, how & when did he learn?
 * I really love the graph of the awards!! I think you did a very good job overall with the article!

I hope that this feedback is helpful. :)