User:Cambriaharrington/Autism service dog/Blanchard89 Peer Review

The foundation section was worded very nicely. I would maybe begin with the history behind disability education first.

The issues section included very important topics\questions. It perfectly described them. However, I would consider rewording the word "issue" and replace it with something to better explain what the "issues are". Such as "Problems with education".... ect.

"Issues
DSE is concerned with critical issues concerning the education of people identified as disabled. Central questions of concern to DSE scholars are:"

I would possibly include how K-12 are affected, how section 504 is used, and possible the history\importance behind it as well.

There are many organizations that seek for equality within the classroom, it would be nice to see those and information regarding them on her as well!