User:CameronEGraham015/Heuchera americana/King-Joma Peer Review

General info
CameronEGraham015
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:CameronEGraham015/Heuchera americana
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Heuchera americana

Evaluate the drafted changes
Please go back and check grammar as well as punctuation and capitalization. Looking through the characteristic section, there are a lot of abrupt stops and punctuations. The tone of the content is very awkward, and in the modern use section having both cancer and vaginal discharges together without the separating context from the source makes for a odd line of text "The American Alumroot has been known but not thoroughly researched to help with cancer and vaginal discharges". And again after that is a weird use of a period "however. it sides side effects haven been known to be irritation of stomach, kidney and liver failure".

Again please review the grammar and reread the content of the original as well as what you've edited in to make sure it sounds and reads correctly. I did notice in the editing history that you copied from a source? ("copied from Heuchera americana article" ) I took a quick glace and didn't see you copy anything, but beware the point of editing isn't to copy word for word information you find.