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Justin Bibb, Mayor of Cleveland, Ohio
Justin Bibb

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because Justin Bibb is the Mayor of Cleveland, Ohio and who I will be doing research on to help create a larger, more detailed Wikipedia page for him.

Evaluate the article
The article provides very clear, concise information on Mayor Bibb and does so with a very neutral voice. I found the information to be very relevant, however more could most certainly be added in terms of his actual policy-making. Most of the information about his status as mayor is focused solely on the election. I would say that the lead section, organization, tone, and content have created a good base for the article to develop further. There is nothing happening behind the scenes in the talk page, however the images and media provided in the article are sufficient for the topics discussed. Finally, the embedded links and references do work and are very helpful. Overall, the article is a good start that could be developed further with more details about the work that Mayor Bibb is doing on a day-to-day basis. Therefore, my only critique would be to add some more relevant details about what he is doing as the Mayor of Cleveland.