User:Cameronmac1/Canntaireachd/Mc tullochgorm Peer Review

Feedback for Cameron:

The content you've added seems pretty up to date.

Maybe instead of saying:

Different pipers had different words for Canntaireachd and so here is an example of Canntaireachd based off of Mary Ann Lindsay.

You could say:

''Different pipers had different words for Canntaireachd. Below is an example of ceòl beag movements as played by Hebridean piper Mary Ann Lindsay, stated in Jodshua Dickson's article. ''

Your content is neutral so thats good.

The link works to the journal.

Maybe if you were to add more to your edit you could probably use another source but just for this one is fine.

The source is up to date.

You don't have any spelling errors.

Overall: I think just rewording the sentence and playing around with it would be all you need for this edit. I think it would be easy to fix and then put into the real article.

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