User:Cameronobr1/Thomasina Scarlet /Ashleighantrim2100 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cameronobr1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cameronobr1/Thomasina Scarlet


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Thomasina Scarlet

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I'll come back tomorrow and hopefully try to peer review literally anything:(