User:Camillemcleod/Intelligence Reform and Terrorism Prevention Act/Ajdel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Camillemcleod


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Camillemcleod/Intelligence_Reform_and_Terrorism_Prevention_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Intelligence Reform and Terrorism Prevention Act

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I didn't see a new lead which makes sense because it looks like you're in the process of updating most of the sections.
 * I like the new sections you added, they seem like they're make it a lot easier to understand the law than the existing list of provisions.
 * Everything so far has a neutral tone and the controversy section will give a good balance.
 * It looks like you've already added some new sources and they're reputable which is great.
 * Overall it looks like you got a great start and have a good idea of where you want to go with everything.