User:Camillemcleod/Intelligence Reform and Terrorism Prevention Act/OneWomanOneVoice Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Camillemcleod)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Camillemcleod/Intelligence Reform and Terrorism Prevention Act


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Intelligence Reform and Terrorism Prevention Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead- I see what your plans are in implementing the information for this section. I think that once the information is inputted it will be a good start to the article.
 * Content- I think that the content that you plan to add is very well organized. The original article doesn't have the flow that you plan to implement and I like your plans.  I think your article will be informative and well laid out.
 * Tone and Balance- As of right now with the information that you currently have I think that the tone and balance are natural and unbiased. In the section that you have titled controversy and response be very careful with the information that you input and the sources that you use to make sure that they are fact checked sources that don't guide the reader into a certain opinions.
 * Sources and References- I'm sure that your work develops this section will be updated and well cited.
 * Organization- I like that you are changing the organization of the original page. I think that the layout that you have chosen is easy to read and will have better flow.
 * Images and Media- I was wondering if you will include the current graphic from the original article or if you will choose not to include it?
 * Overall Impression- My overall impression is that you have a good idea of where you are headed with your article. I like the layout that you have chosen for your article and the changes that you plan to implement.  I look forward to seeing your article develop.