User:Campcrystallake1935/Janet Mock/Mlproffitt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Janet Mock group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Campcrystallake1935/Janet_Mock?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Janet Mock

Evaluate the drafted changes
Why was she introduced to sex work at such a young age? Is there any information on how she became associated with this group of 18-25 year olds?

Any information on why she moved to live in Hawaii?

I think this is a good start with information that should be featured in her wikipage. Though more information should be included to provide some background.