User:Candencemcneil/Chromium toxicity/Nc1018! Peer Review

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Nc1018! I think that your article is well organized and very detailed in the amount of information that is provided. All though I think that more information on trivalent chromium. I also like how your article is straight to the point and gives the reader the right amount of background information without straying from the topic.


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