User:Candles59/Near-death experience/Jbeditor16 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Near death experience group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * No draft


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Near-death experience

Evaluate the drafted changes
What have they done well?

They reviewed and corrected the pre existing grammatical errors as well as added relevant information.

What could they do better?

Researched more on different sources to add volume and knowledge to the article.