User:Candyw5268/Reinforcement/AmariHau Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Candyw5268


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Candyw5268/Reinforcement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Reinforcement

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your draft provides a nice example for Shaping and how to use shaping when teaching a desired behavior. My comments are below:


 * Add an overview of the article and its main sections in the Lead.
 * Referencing to Evidence Based Practices was a nice edition.
 * Are there any other EBP's can be used with Shaping?
 * Nice example with food aversion.
 * Spelling errors in draft.
 * Updated articles with working links.

It seems that your article is full of great information and a large amount of subsections and examples. What your draft is goin to add will be helpful to readers to see an example about food aversion as well as what it is. Hope my comments are helpful in the editing process. Best of luck.