User:CantElopeIsland/Cyclopentadienylcobalt dinitrosyl/Spqr mc Peer Review

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The Lead has been updated with the new content; it has a clear and concise introduction that includes a brief description of the article's main topic as well as the main ideas of each of the sections.

The content is comprehensive and directly relevant to the article's focus, maintaining neutrality. It provides a concise overview of the molecule and its historical discoveries without showing bias towards any particular viewpoint.

The article is very notable, since it introduces a intermediate present in many useful reactions. The sources are thorough, recent, and from reputable peer-reviewed journals, and they do reflect what the article is presenting. For example, this paper by Toste and Bergman does illustrate the fact that C-C bonds could be made with Michael acceptors.

The article is logically organized, progressing from the intermediate's discovery and its main reactivities and applications.

The inclusion of visually appealing images with captions is commendable. However, some images lack citations, such as the HOMO and LUMO diagrams, which violate Wikipedia's guidelines. These should be reserved for in-person presentations unless properly cited. I do love the analysis of the DFT calculations! They are very detailed and comprehensive, but without any citations, they should not be included unfortunately either.

To improve clarity for common readers, more Chem Draws illustrating starting materials, reaction conditions, and product formations should be included. For example, the last section about Annulation as well as origin of the enantioselectivity could greatly benefit from clear diagrams.