User:Canvas1010student/Biological carbon fixation/JeremyRack Peer Review

General info
Isaiah Roach - Canvas1010student?
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Canvas1010student/Biological_carbon_fixation/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography
 * Biological carbon fixation:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
So first off, it is a little hard to tell if this is Isaiah's paper because i looked through every article and who it is assigned to and I did not see his name at all so I am assuming Canvas1010student is him. Secondly, the sandbox draft is completely blank so all I have to look at are the 3 references in the bibliography; one being a published book by a university, and two scientific journals. There is no description for these 3 added references into the main article that I have seen. It says that they are reliable sources on the topic, but the main article goes into detail about biological carbon fixation a lot, and the references do not. I would say read the main article, find a specific topic in the article that does not hold a lot of weight, or if it is super broad, then use these 3 references to put specifics into the main article to boost credibility instead of having more broad statements.