User:Cappiahkubi/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Pansexuality


 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead of the article was able to do a good job at making sure to include an understandable definition of the word pansexual. Pansexuality refers to be attracted to person despite their sex or gender identity. The author did not take an unnecessary number of sources to use within the article. The author also did a good job at introducing how bisexuality and pansexuality are sometimes mixed together without losing focusing on the main topic. I would have liked to see a personal story from a known person about their experience with pansexuality. The article remained neutral throughout the time read.


 * Sources
 * https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/pansexual

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Noxolo Nogwaza


 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead of the article did a great job of introducing the main person of discussion. Since there isn't a lot of information on Noxolo the author wasn't able to include a lot of information on her. The author did a great job at gathering as much information as they could on a person who isn't known by the entire public. The author did a great job at describing what happened with the activist, and the after result of her death.


 * Sources
 * https://www.amnesty.org.uk/files/w4r_tier_2_case_sheets_south_africa.pdf

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Julie Sondra Decker


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article had a hard time taking a neutral side towards the Youtube personality. The author seems to attack Julie the entire article while relaying the facts. The article seems to focus on the negative events that have happened in Julie's life. The article is being checked for accuracy, and has recently been disputed. The article needs to include balanced information on the overall life of Julie. The article doesn't even touch base on the main topic of aromatic. Needs a lot of improvement.


 * Sources
 * https://juliesondradecker.com/

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Gender Bender


 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead did a great job at introducing the information. The information was neutral throughout the entire article. I was able to get a lot of sources and reliable information out of this article. The author was able to provide examples of famous people who are defined as gender bender. The article was also able to give us a background on how the term gender bender came to be. The article was also able to touch on the general idea of LGBTQ+.


 * Sources
 * https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/gender%20bender

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Travesti


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is currently being reviewed because it needs additional citations for verification. The article is also being reviewed because of original research being the main source. The article does seem to include other sources. The author did do a good job at including a proper definition for the term. The article does need to revised and structured slightly better.


 * Sources
 * https://www.definitions.net/definition/travesti