User:Captainq25/Stearns Hardware Store (Oakland, OR)/ChrisBranch1999 Peer Review

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Your work seems to touch on all the bases that were asked of us to have completed, and it summarizes the history and architecture well. If it were at all possible to find any more works or articles that speak about the Stearns family, another few lines of dialogue about them would help flesh out that section just a bit more. However it did take me hours to find material for my project so it is clearly very sparse for many of these locations. In the beginning of the Architecture section, the word stories is capitalized, just a small punctuation issue. Also perhaps changing "in a 75x75 foot square layout" to "in a square 75x75 foot layout would help with clarity. I also may have done this wrong myself, but I think you can insert a title at the top of the article to get away from the User: format for the titles.