User:Captainq25/Stearns Hardware Store (Oakland, OR)/Jencool17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Quinn Millegan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Captainq25/Stearns_Hardware_Store_(Oakland,_OR)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed looking over your draft, Quinn! I think your lead contains the right amount of general information that's needed to get the broad picture across to readers, and I think it's a cool touch that you added the exact location of the store in your lead as well. I think the overall layout of your article works well by having the history and then the architecture as it helps with the flow of information. Also by including the hyper links to certain terminology used in your article, I think that's definitely a strength because it helps readers navigate what they're reading and also makes the credibility even higher. Your sources seem to work great for the article, and having those specific newspaper/magazine outlets as sources is super insightful for the history of ownership and construction. I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors so it looks good on that front as well. I think you've got an awesome draft here!