User:Cara.begley/Coccinella septempunctata/Ms1904 Peer Review

General info
Me: Ms1904
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Editor: Cara.begley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Coccinella septempunctata (I could not find the link to the draft/sandbox so I based my review off of the article provided)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Coccinella septempunctata

Evaluate the drafted changes
i really liked reading your article and think its very interesting! Overall your citations and grammar seemed good to me. I saw that after one of the sentences in the "Biological control, introductions, and infestations" section under "interactions with humans" one of the citations said "citation needed" so I would just go back there and fix that. I would also create a bibliography as well as a sandbox draft for your article to track your progress. Other than that I didn't see much structural issues. If you wanted or planned on further expanding on the article I think the section under "in culture" might give you a lot to work with. I saw that there was one sentence very generally summarizing and only really focusing on the United States and Finland but I think you could really give get into the history of the significance of the lady bug in history, I think it would be interesting to expand on. You could also talk about why they are considered to be lucky in certain cultures. Ms1904 (talk) 03:39, 12 March 2024 (UTC)