User:Cara.begley/Directional selection/Allisonk444 Peer Review

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Cara.begley
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a good article for you to edit. It gives a general overview of the topic but I think some of it is a bit too technical and becomes difficult for the average reader to follow. Specifically when it talks about detection methods. For such a short article I feel it could be greatly improved upon with some summarizing of information for the general public. In addition the timescale and ecological impacts sections are both very short and could due with some more information. Overall there is a lot of room for improvement of this article and you'll do a great job with whatever you choose to do with it!