User:Caramelized Mitochondria/Mutan/Landonsevere Peer Review

This looks good, but is it all copied from the book? Have you written anything on your own? I think dissecting this excerpt and re-writing in your own words with occasional quotes from the book might be useful. I understand that sometimes the book says it best, but maybe some sort of introduction paragraph first? Cool topic though!

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